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This page details one or more prototype versions of Advanced Dungeons & Dragons: Pool of Radiance (NES).

Hiddenpalace.org logo.png  This prototype is documented on Hidden Palace.

A localization prototype of the NES Pool of Radiance was found, dumped, and released by the Nolan Brothers to Hidden Palace on December 26, 2024.

Similar to the Hillsfar prototype, most of the differences involve the text. At this point, the script appears to have been directly translated from the Japanese version and has not yet been altered to comply with Nintendo of America's content policies.

Pre-Generated Characters

The pre-generated characters have been changed and are now fully-leveled with very powerful equipment. It's possible these characters were created for the US localization team for easier playtesting.

  • Gwydion, besides being fully leveled and powerfully equipped, was kept pretty much the same.
  • Felgar was changed from a Half-Elf Fighter/Mage/Cleric, a multi-class not normally available in the NES version, to a Human Cleric.
  • Goldleaf was changed from an Elf Fighter/Mage/Thief to a Human Mage.

Text Differences

Hmmm...
To do:
Document all text differences between prototype and final.

The prototype appears to be a direct translation of the Japanese Famicom version. Primarily, the references to religion and words related to death have been changed in the final. For example, the word "kill" was changed to "slay", "die" became "expired", "chapel" and "temple" were changed to "shrine", and "priests" are called "clerics". There were also references to blood in the prototype that were completely stripped from the NES version.

Another interesting change is the word "evil" being changed to "wicked". This is interesting due to some of the character alignments having "evil" in them (Lawful Evil, Neutral Evil, and Chaotic Evil), in which the alignment names were kept in the final.

General Differences

  • During an encounter, the option to "parlay" was changed to "parley".
  • During combat, the target is now just a thicker version of the main cursor.
  • There is a glitch which sometimes prevents a player to use projectile weapons, but it's currently unknown how the glitch works, as it seems to be at random.
Proto Final
You encounter bloodthirsty
You encounter malevolent

For the random encounters, in which the enemy's name appears after the text. (You encounter bloodthirsty/malevolent kobolds.")

New Phlan

  • The Arms and Armor clerk was originally called Armorer.
  • The Shopkeeper was originally called General Items clerk.
  • The Priests found at the various shrines (originally temples) are now Clerics.
  • The shrines/temples originally had the spell Raise Dead, which was later titled Raise the Perished.
    • The Stone to Flesh spell originally cost 2000GP, as opposed to the 20000GP in the final.
Proto Final
The boatman approaches... Boatman: The boarding fee is 5GP.
The boatman approaches and says: The boarding fee is 5GP.

The text for when you go to the docks to board a boat was changed slightly.

Proto Final
Temple Guard: Bishop Braccio is very busy.
Shrine Guard: Braccio is very busy.

When you try to meet Braccio before the council commissions you to, a guard will halt you from entering his quarters.

Proto Final
Dirten: How do you do? I'm a priest of Tyr.
There is a temple of Bane the Demon across the river.
It was our temple before they stole it from us...
I want to get our temple back from the monsters. Will you help me?
There is a secret treasure in the temple. It is yours if you succeed.
Dirten: How do you do? I'm a cleric of Tyr.
There is a shrine of Bane across the river.
It was ours before they stole it from us...
I want to get our shrine back from the monsters. Will you help me?
There is a secret treasure in the shrine. It is yours if you succeed.

The text for when you meet Braccio's cleric Dirten was changed quite a bit, including referring to Bane as a demon.

Proto Final
Priest: You are the villains who attacked the city guard.
I'll punish you in the name of our God.
Cleric: You are the villains who attacked the city guard. You must pay!

When you kill the City Watch of New Phlan and go to the temple of Sune, a group of clerics ambush the party. The text for this battle was significantly changed in the final.

Proto Final
Priest: Wait. Leave that poor man here. We will treat him.
Mad Man: ...
Cleric: Wait. Leave that poor mad man here. We will treat him.
The mad man babbles
Proto Final
The shopkeeper offers jewelry for sale: Can I show you something?
Jeweler: I have many beautiful pieces. May I show you something?

The text for the jeweler's shop was changed from a third-person perspective to a first-person perspective, fitting with the rest of the shop clerks.

Proto Final
This is an entrance to the Slum. The guards are watching you.
This is an entrance to the Slums. The guards are watching you.

Due to the transliteration of the Slums in Japanese (スラム, Suramu), the word was incorrectly spelled in the prototype.

Proto Final
The city guards comes in: The guard: Move along here!
The city guards come in: Move along here!

When the party causes trouble (mainly a fight in the taverns), the city watch responds. The text was slightly altered.

Proto Final
We can do nothing for you,  evil one!
We can do nothing for you,  wicked one!

When the party kills the city guard, this causes most (but not all) the people of Phlan to refuse service to the party. This can be fixed by the party simply by completing a mission and getting rewarded from the city council.

Proto Final
The Man:  Welcome. I'm Rolf.  I'll be your guide around  Phlan. Please follow me.
Man:  Welcome. I'm Rolf.  I'll be your guide around  Phlan. Please follow me.

Sorry, Rolf. You're no longer "The Man", you're just... "Man".

Proto Final
This is the Temple of Tyr...  We have three temples in the city.
One for Tyr, one for Sune, and one for Tempus. Bishop Braccio is in the temple of Tyr.
This is the Shrine of Tyr...  We have three shrines in the city.
One for Tyr, one for Sune, and one for Tempus. Braccio is in the Shrine of Tyr.

The very first line in the game that was censored; Temples were changed to Shrines in the final, and Bishop Braccio had his title stripped.

Proto Final
This is the temple of Sune on your right. On your left is the City Park.
This is the Shrine of Tempus on your right. On your left is the City Park.

The locations for the templs/shrine of Sune and Tempus appear to have been swapped in the final.

Tavern Text

Proto Final
Hey! Where's my purse? Your purse has been stolen.
Hey! Where's my purse? You have been robbed.

Spoken by the first party member.

Proto Final
* The master of the Graveyard is a powerful Undead.
* The master of the graveyard is a powerful undead creature.
Proto Final
* The buccaneers are dealing in slaves. I hear on that occasion, they pitch a camp on the seashore in the west.
* The buccaneers are dealing in slaves. Sometimes they pitch a camp on the seashore in the west.
Proto Final
* The monsters in the Old Phlan are led by a Big Boss who never dies.
* The monsters in Old Phlan are led by a Big Boss who never sleeps.
Proto Final
* A dragon in the North mountains? It is a silver dragon... Supposed to be a good dragon.
* A dragon in the northern mountains? It is a silver dragon... They say it's supposed to be a good dragon.
Proto Final
* Greco of the Arms Shop works 24 hours a day, but if you enter through the back door, he deals with you.
* of the Arms Shop works 24 hours a day, but if you enter through the back door, he will deal with you.

For some reason, the Famicom version gave one of the arms dealers in New Phlan the name Greco. This was omitted from the North American release, and isn't even mentioned in the computer versions. It was probably cut from the final version because of this; it is unlikely Nintendo would have requested the name to be removed.

Proto Final
* Zhentil Keep is like a sovereign nation...  Unless we are careful it will make war with Phlan.
* Zhentil Keep is like a sovereign nation...  Unless we are careful it will decl are waron Phlan.

Note the typo in the final release, which should read "declare war on Phlan."

Proto Final
* A dreadful monster is living in the Slum...  It is too much for a beginner Hero.
* A dreadful monster is living in the Slums...  It is too much for a beginner hero.

A typo here; "Slum". This is due to the original Japanese text being "Suramu" (スラム).

Proto Final
* The Barren River was clean long ago...  Well, Barren means dirty.  We called it the  River Stojanow when  it was clean.
* The Barren River was clean long ago...  Well, Barren means dirty.  We called it the  Stojanow River  when  it was clean.
Proto Final
* Some monsters can never be  killed without silver or magic arms.
* Well, I know some monsters  silver weapons can't kill...  They can only be killed by  magical weapons.
* Some monsters can never be  slain without silver or magic arms.
* Well, I know some monsters  silver weapons can't harm...  They can only be slain by  magical weapons.

Some Engrish here. It should read "Well, I know for some monsters, silver weapons can't kill them..."

Proto Final
* Some swords have souls... Ones who don't match their Alignment can't use the weapons.
* Some swords have spirits... Ones who don't match their alignments can't use the weapons.
Proto Final
Suddenly a drunken brawl erupts. You are in the middle of the fight.
Suddenly a brawl erupts. You are in the middle of the fight.

The random fights in the tavern were originally "drunken" brawls. The word was dropped most likely at Nintendo's request.

Training Hall

The prototype has this curious string of text, spoken by the trainer:

I think that it's err in GEN!

which was removed from the final.

When choosing to fight a duel, the speaker is credited to "Information" in the prototype, as well as a reference to death. This was changed to the clerk speaking, and the training hall trying not to "harm" adventurers in a duel.

Proto Final
Information: Do you know the rules of dueling?
Information: A duel is fought between evenly-matched heroes.
When you knock your opponent to 0 HP, you win.
We try not to kill opponents...
But sometimes accidents do happen.
Information: Do you really want to fight a duel?
Information: Who wants to fight a duel?
Clerk: Do you know the rules of dueling?
Clerk: A duel is fought between evenly-matched heroes.
When you knock your opponent to 0 HP, you win.
We try not to harm opponents...
But sometimes accidents do happen.
Clerk: Do you really want to fight a duel?
Clerk: Who wants to fight a duel?
Proto Final
Information: Anybody else wants to fight a duel?
Information: That person cannot fight.
Clerk: Does anybody else want to fight a duel?
Clerk: That person cannot fight.
Proto Final
CAUTION: To protect your saved game... Press the Reset Button BEFORE switching the machine off. Otherwise your saved game will be lost.
CAUTION: To protect your saved game press the Reset Button BEFORE switching the machine off. Otherwise your saved game will be deleted.

City Hall

Proto Final
You enter City Hall. The corridor runs south. The door beyond is watched by guards.
You enter City Hall. The corridor runs south, and the door beyond is watched by guards.
Proto Final
Cadorna: How dare you steal my family treasure. I can never forget that.
Cadorna: How dare you steal my family treasure. I'll never forget that.
Proto Final
Your purpose has been accomplished, you may fight the remaining monsters if you wish.
Your mission has been accomplished. You may fight the remaining monsters if you wish.
Proto Final
The Clerk: I hear you destroyed the Undead in the graveyard.
The Clerk: I hear you cleaned the Cadorna textile house.
The Clerk: I hear you got rid of the monsters in the Evil Temple.
The Clerk: I praise your completion of the mission in Podol Plaza.
The Clerk: You drove away the danger of the lizard men.
The Clerk: Mmmm...you took the temple from the monsters... I'll make the temple treasure your reward.
The Clerk: The Council confirms the death of Cadorna.
The Clerk: I hear you destroyed the undead in the graveyard.
The Clerk: I hear you cleaned out the Cadorna textile house.
The Clerk: I hear you got rid of the monsters in the dark shrine.
The Clerk: I praise your completion of the mission at Podol Plaza.
The Clerk: You eliminated the danger of the lizard men.
The Clerk: Mmmm...you took the shrine from the monsters... I'll make the shrine treasure your reward.
The Clerk: The Council confirms the passage of Cadorna.
Proto Final
The Clerk: The Undead of the graveyard have become very dangerous for Phlan.
The Clerk: If you take up the mission to destroy the Undead,
The Clerk: I'll give you a magic weapon.
The Clerk: The undead of the graveyard have become very dangerous for Phlan.
The Clerk: If you take up the mission to destroy the undead,
I'll give you a magic weapon.
Proto Final
The Clerk: Bishop Braccio would like to see you.
The Clerk: He is at the Temple of Tyr to the east of here.
The Clerk: Braccio would like to see you.
He is at the Shrine of Tyr to the east of here.
Proto Final
The Clerk: Trail the source which contaminates the Stojanow River, and end it.
The Clerk: Find what contaminates the Stojanow River and end it.
Proto Final
The Clerk: Send the letter to Zhentil Keep. Cadorna the betrayer might have exchanged the genuine letter for a forgery. Be careful.
The Clerk: Bring the letter to Zhentil Keep. Cadorna the betrayer might have exchanged the genuine letter for a forgery. Be careful.
Proto Final
The Clerk: Cadorna betrayed our town. Kill him as soon as you find him.
The Clerk: Cadorna betrayed our town. Slay him as soon as you find him.
Proto Final
Cadorna: Be careful. I sent one of my servants, but he never came back.
Cadorna: Be careful. I sent one of my servants, Skullcrusher, but he never came back.
Proto Final
Cadorna: Send this letter to Zhentil Keep in the west. Do not read it beforehand.
Cadorna: Bring this letter to Zhentil Keep in the west. Do not read it beforehand.
Proto Final
Urslingen: Go to the Stojanow Gate, and kill the guards.
Urslingen: Go to the Stojanow Gate, and slay the guards.
Proto Final
Lord High Mayor Ulrich Eberhard appears.
Mayor: Now our battle draws to an end.
Lord High Mayor Ulrich Eberhard appears and says:
Now our battle draws to an end.
Proto Final
The guard: I will escort you to the exit.
Guard: I will escort you to the exit.
Proto Final
The guards are coming quickly.
Guards: Wait. You weren't admitted here.
The guards approach. One growls:
Wait. You were not admitted here.
Proto Final
Bishop Braccio appears:
Bishop Braccio: You are the Heroes who have saved our city.
I'll heal him free of charge.
Braccio appears and says:
You are the heroes who have saved our city.
I'll heal him free of charge.
Proto Final

Slums

Proto Final
Dirty insects and rats run beneath your feet.
Large insects and rats run beneath your feet.
Proto Final
A well-built goblin is teaching young goblins how to fight. He smiles when he sees you:
Goblin: Good! Training partners.
A large goblin is teaching young goblins how to fight. He smiles when he sees you and says:
Good! Training partners.
Proto Final
This room is very dirty and smells badly.
This room is very dirty and smells.
Proto Final
It's a very dirty room. There is evidence of a large untidy animal here.
You find a very dirty room. There is evidence of a large untidy animal.
Proto Final
Kobolds are dining here.
Kobold: Who are you? Go away!
Kobolds are dining here. One turns and says:
Who are you? Go away!
Proto Final
You hear a little of their conversation:
You overhear a part of their conversation:
Proto Final
The temple across the river is held by elite orcs.
The shrine across the river is held by elite orcs.
Proto Final
There is an old woman wearing a ragged cloth.
Gypsy: Welcome. I'll read your fortune for 1GP.
There is an old Gypsy woman wearing a ragged cloth who says:
Welcome. I'll read your fortune for 1GP.
Proto Final
The old woman dies without resistance.
The old woman expires without resistance.
Proto Final
The gypsy begins to make strange gestures. Her voice also changes into a deep-throated rasp:
The Gypsy begins to make strange gestures. Her voice changes into a deep-throated rasp:
Proto Final
The gypsy: I'm sorry but the money is not enough.
The Gypsy: I'm sorry but the money is not enough.
Proto Final
A big orc shouts at you:
Orc: This is our house. Go away!
A big orc shouts at you:
This is our house. Go away!
Proto Final
Hobgoblins are fighting over shares of gold coins. One of them sees you and shouts:
Hobgoblin: Thieves!
Hobgoblins are fighting over shares of gold coins. One of them sees you and shouts:
Thieves!
Proto Final
You find many treasures.
You find a lot of treasure.
Proto Final
You enter the site of the old Rope Guild. This building is winding and very complicated. Few who enter here ever return...
You enter the site of the old Rope Guild. This building is very complicated. Few who enter here ever return...
Proto Final
A man comes out hurriedly.
Shopkeeper: I'm very sorry. I'm closed now.
A man comes out hurriedly:
I'm very sorry. I'm closed now.
Proto Final
Soon the man comes out with a package.
Shopkeeper: Please bring it to him.
Soon the man comes out with a package and says:
Please take it to him.
Proto Final
Another one spots you and grins:
The Troll: Yeah you do. You have... them.
A troll spots you and grins:
Yeah, you do. You have... them.
Proto Final
You see shabby
You see some dirty
Proto Final
You see [monster name] But they are unaware of you.
You have surprised [monster name]
Proto Final
You hide yourself
You hide
Proto Final
Monster answers:
The Boss doesn't like you. But I'll let you go if you give me money.
The Monster answers:
The Boss doesn't like you. But I'll let you go if you give me money.
Proto Final
Don't kill me. I got a tip that might help you. Keep away from the weaving house. The undead are increasing rapidly.
Don't hurt me. I got a tip that might help you. Keep away from the Textile House. The undead are multiplying rapidly.
Proto Final
The leader roars: Kill them! He orders.
The leader roars: Slay them! He orders.

Sokal Keep

Proto Final
His arms and belongings are rusty or have rotted to pieces.
His weapons and belongings are rusty or have rotted to pieces.
Proto Final
You find his pouch with a scroll in it. On the scroll are some words in elvish.
You find his pouch with a scroll in it. On the scroll are some words in Elvish.
Proto Final
This elf died long time ago.
This elf expired a long time ago.
Proto Final
The elfin remains have been destroyed
The elven remains have been destroyed.
Proto Final
You found a poor elf's body. All his belongings have rotted away or been looted.
You found a poor elf's remains. All his belongings have rotted away or been looted.
Proto Final
You find a torn scroll in his pouch. You manage to read one word that appears to be a code.
You find a torn scroll in his pouch. You manage to read one word that appears to be a code or password.
Proto Final
You give the password you were taught by Martinez, and the undead leave.
You give the password you learned from Martinez, and the undead leave.
Proto Final
This room is filled with rotten wood. It seems that they had been beds and boxes. Nothing valuable remains in the room.
This room is filled with rotten wood. It seems that there had been cots and lockers. Nothing valuable remains in the room.
Proto Final
Shadows: Ahhhhh... The shadows drift away, moaning.
The shadows drift away moaning: Ahhhhh...
Proto Final
Shadows: Ohhhhh... The shadows make a terrible keening noise.
The shadows make a terrible keening noise:  Ohhhhh...
Proto Final
Ghosts: We were soldiers of the Keep...
The Archbishop bound us here as guards.
Ghosts: There is the Archbishop's diary... Read it!
Ghosts: We were soldiers of the Keep...
The Head Cleric bound our spirits here as guards.
Ghosts: There is the Head Cleric's diary... Read it!
Proto Final
Monsters attacked us again... They knew how to fight better than Kobolds or Goblins.
I think they have a strong leader, they are too good. We can't beat them in this condition.
Ferran Martinez has prepared terrible spells... Now we have no other choice to defend ourselves.
Monsters attacked us again... They knew how to fight better than kobolds or goblins.
I think they have a strong leader, they are too good. We can't beat them in this condition.
Ferrann Martinez has prepared terrible spells... Now we have no other choice but to defend ourselves.
Proto Final
The ogre had a note: Gather your men to the City Port. Then go to Sokal Keep and kill the humans if they come.
If you do well you wil  be rewarded.
The Boss
The ogre had a note: Gather your men at the City Port. Then go to Sokal Keep and slay the humans if they come.
If you do well you will be rewarded.
The Boss
Proto Final
There are traces of a violent battle.
There are traces of a terrible battle.
Proto Final
You find a secret Armory after you pass through an illusionary section of wall.
You find a secret armory after you pass through an illusionary section of wall.
Proto Final
Something glitters in the northwestern corner.
Something glitters in the northwest corner.
Proto Final
There is a shield, a mace, a sword and chain armor.
There is a shield, a mace, a sword and chain mail.
Proto Final
This is the remains of a chapel.¸There are two dried-up orc bodies with painfully contorted faces. There is a large altar to the south.
This is the remains of a shrine. There are two dried-up orc bodies with contorted faces. The main part of the shrine is to the south.
Proto Final
Shadow: I am Ferran Martinez, the bishop of Sokal Keep.
Shadow: I am Ferrann Martinez of Sokal Keep.
Proto Final
Martinez: What destroyed Phlan were those who gained their evil power from the Magic Pool.
Martinez: It was demons such as Tyranthraxus, Edranka, and Torath that led them.
Martinez: What destroyed Phlan were those who gained their terrible power from the Magic Pool.
Martinez: It was monsters such as Tyranthraxus, Edranka, and Torath who led them.
Proto Final
Martinez: But his library was overrun and the books lost.
But his library was overrun and the books were lost.

Kuto's Well

Proto Final
Kuto's well is in front of you. Water gushes from the well.
Kuto's Well is in front of you. Water gushes from its depths.
Proto Final
Norris: You are so very clever to find my hideout... Surrender or you shall die.
Norris: You are so very clever to find my hideout... Surrender or you shall perish.
Proto Final
Kobolds climb from of the well behind you and attacks.
Kobolds climb from of the well behind you and attack.
Proto Final
The leader of the wretched band addresses you:
Kobold: Please do not harm us. We are wounded and tired.
The leader of the wretched kobold band addresses you:
Please do not harm us. We are wounded and tired.
Proto Final
Please, we are too weak to be any danger to you. Most of our band is dead now...
Please, we are too weak to be any danger to you. Most of our band has perished now...
Proto Final
The kobolds begin to cry:
Kobold: Please, please, don't kill us. We do not know anything. Just we want to go home.
The kobolds begin to cry:
Please, please, don't hurt us. We don't know anything. We just  want to go home.
Proto Final
A wide-eyed woman looks at you as you enter the room. She stands and greets the party:
Woman: Welcome. I've been awaiting you a long time. An evil one has come out from the Pool.
He is your enemy... But you can't recognize him at a glance Beware! Before you can respond, the woman disappears.
A wide-eyed woman looks at you as you enter the room. She stands and greets the party:
Welcome. I've been awaiting you for a long time. A wicked one has come out from the Pool.
He is your enemy... But you can't recognize him at a glance. Beware! Before you can respond, the woman disappears.

Mendor's Library

Proto Final
A ghost appears before you.
Ghost: Thieves! I will guard these tomes with my very life!
A ghost appears before you and moans:
Thieves! I will guard these tomes with my very life!
Proto Final
You enter what had once been a pleasant garden. The grass and weeds have choked out other plants and the pond has grown marshy.
You see what had once been a pleasant garden. The grass and weeds have choked out other plants and the pond has become marshy.
Proto Final
You try to pull out of the gook quickly but you take quite a lot of damage.
You try to pull out of the muck quickly but you take quite a lot of damage.

An interesting change, seeing that "gook" can also be considered a slur.

Proto Final
Ouch... My foot has melted a little.
Ouch... My foot is burning!

The prototype had a slightly more graphic depiction of what happens if you walk through the garden.

Proto Final
One is entitled 'The Researches of Poetry.'
One is entitled 'Discourses on Poesy.'
Proto Final
You find the books on geometry, cosmic geometry, and super magical mathematics. None seemed to be useful.
You find the books on geometry, cosmic geometry, and super magical mathematics. None seem too interesting.
Proto Final
You find various books on philosophy. They are veeerry boring.
You find various books on philosophy. They are very boring.
Proto Final
If you step into the water and pray, you will gain magical power.
If you step into the water and meditate, you will gain magical power.
Proto Final
Such were the ones that served Bane the Great Evil King...
Such were the ones that served Bane the Great Wicked King...
Proto Final
He was a cruel man who crushed kingdoms and murdered the fallen monarchs.
But Tyranthraxus himself was finally consumed by the very fire that surrounded him, his body burned away and his spirit roamed free.
Baron Schodt imprisoned Tyranthraxus in a bottle and sank it in Lake Longreach.
And thus was Tyranthraxus' army destroyed...
He was a cruel man who crushed kingdoms and slew the fallen monarches.
But Tyranthraxus himself was finally consumed by the very fire that surrounded him and then his spirit roamed free.
Baron Schodt imprisoned Tyranthraxus in a bottle and sank it in Lake Longreach.
And thus was Tyranthraxus' army destroyed...
Proto Final
There is a of dull reptilian monster here. It makes a hissing sound.
You hear a hissing sound. There is a dull reptilian monster just at your feet.
There is a of dull reptilian monster here. It hasn't noticed you yet.
There is a of dull reptilian monster here. He seems to have just waken up.
There is a dull colored reptilian monster here. It makes a hissing sound.
You hear a hissing sound. There is a dull colored reptilian monster just at your feet.
There is a dull colored reptilian monster here. It hasn't noticed you yet.
There is a dull colored reptilian monster here. He seems to have just woken up.

These strings of text aren't actually tied together, but each one is for when you encounter the basilisk, as sometimes you can surprise the basilisk or vice versa, or at times the basilisk won't see you.

Proto Final
The furniture in this room has completely decayed. Human bones are scattered about the floor.
The furniture in this room has completely decayed. Bones are scattered about the floor.

Encountering Mad Man:

Proto Final
You find a man cowering in a corner.
Mad Man: Help! Help!
What's the matter?
Mad Man: Mercy! Please spare me! Die, you pit slime!
The man seems quite mad.
You find a madman cowering in a corner sobbing:
Help! Help! What's the matter?
Mad Man: Mercy! Please spare me! Perish, you pit slime!
The man babbles incoherently.
Proto Final
Mad Man: The big one! The evil one! He is in the Castle of Flowers!
Mad Man: The big one! The wicked one! He is in the Castle of Flowers!
Proto Final
The room contains one desk and bench.
The room contains one desk and a bench.
Proto Final
They throw up their hands.
Kobold: Don't kill us!
They throw up their hands.
Kobold: Don't harm us!
Proto Final
Kobold: The boss of the Textile House is hidden in a secret room. After telling you this the Kobolds flee.
Kobold: The boss of the textile house is hidden in a secret room. After telling you this the Kobolds flee.

Podol Plaza

Proto Final
There is a minor temple. The symbol of Ilmater has been removed, and replaced by the mark of Bane.
There is a minor shrine. The symbol of Il-Mater has been removed, and replaced by the mark of Bane.
Proto Final
The orc smiles weirdly.
Orc Priest: Welcome. May Lord Bane save you.
We are hiring creatures for our Temple across the river.
We need creatures to take back our Temple across the river.
The orc smiles weirdly and says:
Welcome. May Lord Bane save you.
We are hiring creatures for our shrine across the river.
We need creatures to take back our shrine across the river.
Proto Final
Orc Priest: If you change your mind, come back in two hours.
Orc Cleric: If you change your mind, come back in two hours.
Proto Final
Orc Priest: Kill the heretics! He points a bony finger at you.
Orc Cleric: Slay the heretics! He points a bony finger at you.
Proto Final
This is a broken house. Only mice scurry about.
This is a naban doned house. Only mice scurry about.

Typo in the final, but not in the prototype. It meant to say "an abandoned".

For the mission where you must watch the auction:

Proto Final
Well, what shall we do?
1 Enter boldly
2 Disguise yourselves as monsters
3 Go forward hiding yourselves stealthily
What do you do?
1 Bold
2 Disguise
3 Stealth
Well, what shall you do?
1 Enter boldly
2 Disguise yourselves as monsters
3 Go forward stealthily
What do you do?
1 Enter
2 Disguise yourself
3 Go forward

The options for when you enter Podol Plaza for the auction mission. The text was originally much more simplistic. Also, the perspective was changed from first-person to third-person.

Proto Final
I'll, uh, let you go this time. The Monsters hurry away.
I'll, uh, let you go this time. The monsters hurry away.
Proto Final
A monster yells.
Humans of Phlan! Kill them!
A monster yells.
Humans of Phlan! Get them!
Proto Final
happens to pass. The monsters grab up their weapons.
happen to pass. The monsters grab their weapons.

For the random encounters. A monster's name precedes the text. (Ogres happen to pass.)

Proto Final
The number of ogres increase these days. The giant took their castle and drove them out
There are more ogres these days. The giants took their castle and drove them out.
Proto Final
leader: The Temple of Bane in the Plaza is recruiting for Lord Mace. Another µ.
leader: The Shrine of Bane in the Plaza is recruiting for Mace. Another µ.
Proto Final
An ogre holding either a staff or wand is speaking:
Auctioneer: Welcome to the auction... The bidding is about to start.
An ogre auctioneer holding either a staff or wand is speaking:
Welcome to the auction... The bidding is about to start.
Proto Final
The monsters rushed on the ogre. They searched the ogre, but it didn't have anything.
The monsters grab the ogre. They search him but don't find anything.
Proto Final
The man has disappeared in the confusions.
The man has disappeared in the confusion.
Proto Final
The Ogre: This is a Staff of Command... You can create an army with it.
Auctioneer: This is a Rod of Rulership... You can create an army with it.
Proto Final
Good. Here are humans... Kill them!
Good. Here are humans... Slay them!

The Pit

Proto Final
A Shop sign reads: THE PIT 
An inn sign reads: THE PIT 
Proto Final
When you enter the door, you collide with a drunken buccaneer:
Buccaneer: Hey! One of you will pay for this insult! One of you, come here! Who'll fight?
When you enter the door, you collide with a rowdy buccaneer who growls:
Hey! One of you will pay for this insult! Who'll fight?
Proto Final
Hobgoblin: OK.
Goblin: Yeah! Let's kill 'em.
The monsters join in the attack.
Hobgoblin: OK.
Goblin: Yeah! Let's hurt 'em.
The monsters join in the attack.
Proto Final
Blech! The booze tastes terrible, but it packs a wallop...
Blech! The cider tastes terrible.
Proto Final
When you wake up the sun is shining in your bleary eyes. Oh! Someone stole my purse.
When you wake up the sun is shining in your bleary eyes. Oh! I've been robbed!
Proto Final
Me? I thought something had died here. Don't hobgoblins ever bathe?
Ogre: Too noisy! You little ones!
Goblin: What wrong with you? A big quarrel begins...
Me? I thought something had expired here. Don't hobgoblins ever bathe?
Ogre: Too noisy! You little ones!
Goblin: What's wrong with you? A big quarrel begins...

Secret Temple

Proto Final
It seemed to be a secret temple of Ilmater. The monsters haven't been able to find it.
A young woman appears:
Young Woman: You must be heroes to have made it here. Can I offer healing services?
It seemed to be a secret Shrine of Il-Mater. The monsters haven't been able to find it.
A young priestess appears and says:
You must be heroes to have made it here. Can I?

Both the prototype and final refer to her as a "Priestess" after this text, when she tells the party they can rest as long as they wish. Since the other references to "priests" were removed from the final, they must have forgotten to change this text.

Textile House

Proto Final
The floor and wall of the room are stained with blood. It seems to have been used for some evil ceremony.
The floor and wall of the room are stained. It seems to have been used for some terrible ceremony.

The room originally had bloodstains. In the final, it was stained with an unknown substance.

Proto Final
Evil looking frog boil up from below.
Wicked looking frogs boil up from below.
Proto Final
Hobgoblin: Humans! Die!
Hobgoblin: Humans! Perish!
Proto Final
The floor is wet.
The room is messy.
Proto Final
Sniff...Sniff...Hobgoblin nursery.
Mmmm...looks like a hobgoblin nursery.
Proto Final
The letters 'SKULLCRUSHER' are carved in the north wall.
The word 'SKULLCRUSHER' is carved in the north wall.
Proto Final
There is a dead hobgoblin on the ground. SKULLCRUSHER is written on the wall.
There is an expired hobgoblin on the ground. SKULLCRUSHER is carved into the wall.
Proto Final
Examine the body Destroy Nothing
Examine the body Kick the body Nothing

Some choice text for an unknown part of the game. The option to Destroy was changed to Kick.

Proto Final
You break the body to pieces. If something valuable were in it, it would be broken too.
You touch the body. It doesn't move.

If you 'Destroy' the body in the prototype, the game would warn you something valuable was broken among the remains. But since this was changed in the released version to just 'kicking' the body, the game tells you it doesn't move.

Proto Final
There is flesh and meat... and human bones here
There are bones here.
Proto Final
A well-built man is bound with chains. There's a piece of paper near him: Paper: It appears that giants and trolls are coming into Valjevo Castle. Ettins and bugbears protect the Stojanow Gate. There's rumors that smugglers sneak supplies through the gate to The Boss.
A large man is bound with chains. There's a piece of paper near him: Skullcrusher--  It appears that giants and trolls are coming into Valjevo Castle. Ettins and bugbears protect the Stojanow Gate. There are rumors that smugglers sneak supplies through the gate to The Boss.

The text for when you find Skullcrusher was altered.

Proto Final
Man: How dare you kill a defenseless man! The man dies without any resistance.
Skullcrusher: Hey! I'm unarmed... He expires without any resistance.

The text for when you killed Skullcrusher while he was still bound up in chains was originally a bit more intense.

Proto Final
Man: I'll help you if you help me.
Man: I came very close to killing the hobgoblin chief. So close!
Man: What? You arrogant jerks!
Man: I don't like you!
The man waits impatiently.
Man: I don't know who you are, but thank you for saving me.
The man leaves the room too.
Skullcrusher: I'm Skullcrusher. I'll help you if you help me.
Skullcrusher: I came very close to slaying the hobgoblin chief. So close...
Skullcrusher: What? Why you...!
Skullcrusher: I don't like you!
Skullcrusher waits impatiently.
Skullcrusher: I don't know who you are, but thank you for saving me.
The man leaves the room too.

The text for when you parley with Skullcrusher was changed. However, they still accidentally call him "the man" when he walks away in the final.

Proto Final
Man: Hey! Thank you very much for your help. I'm a servant of Lord Cadorna.
Please, Take me with you.
Skullcrusher: Hey! Thank you very much for your help. I'm a servant of Lord Cadorna.
Please, take me with you.
Proto Final
You enter a large room. It is an evil sanctuary.
(First party member): I smell evil here...
An old hobgoblin is at the altar.
Hobgoblin: I am the mighty Grishnak! How dare you disturb the ceremony?
You enter a large room. It is the sanctuary of some dark force.
(First party member): I smell wickedness here...
An old hobgoblin is at the front.
Hobgoblin: I am the mighty Grishnak! How dare you disturb the ceremony?
Proto Final
Skullcrusher: The east wall is the secret door. The chief is beyond this wall.
Skullcrusher: There is a secret door in the eastern wall. The chief is beyond that door.
Proto Final
A huge ogre, over nine feet tall, stands there. The ogre: You puny ones! Die!
A huge ogre, over nine feet tall, stands there and growls: You puny ones! Go!
Proto Final
Yes, I open it
Yes, open it

The choice for opening Cadorna's box after Skullcrusher warns you not to.

Proto Final
Hobgoblin: Humans! Die!
Hobgoblin: Humans! Attack them!
Proto Final
You found a piece of someone's diary:
The number of undead in Valhingen Graveyard is increasing The Boss is very angry.
He ordered me to the Graveyard to find the cause. I think there's a Vampire or Demon.
I'll make a preliminary investigation with my men.
You found a piece of a diary:
The number of undead in Valhingen Graveyard is increasing. The Boss is very angry.
He ordered me to the Graveyard to find the cause. I think there's a Vampire or some other monster.
I'll make a preliminary investigation with my men.

The period was missing after "increasing", and the person who wrote the diary thought the graveyard menace (dubbed by the game) was either a vampire or demon.

Proto Final
'THIEVES ONLY' is written on the well. There's no ladders or ropes.¸An unskilled climber could easily fall...
'THIEVES ONLY' is written on the well. There are no ladders or ropes. An unskilled climber could easily fall...
Proto Final
could go down softly with the ring.
could go down easily with the ring.
Proto Final
A white-haired thief stands there. Thief: Welcome to my guild. I am Restal.
A white-haired thief stands there smiling and says: Welcome to my guild. I am Restal.

Kovel Mansion

Proto Final
It's all right. The trap was successfully removed.
It's all right. The trap is disarmed.
Proto Final
Look out! The trap has been tripped.
Look out! The trap has been sprung.
Proto Final
A big needle fires from the back of the room!
A big spike is fired from the back of the room!
Proto Final
The sound reverberates through the whole building.
The sound reverberates through out the whole building.
Proto Final
You catch the thief.
The Thief: Please don't kill me! I'm a leader. I'll order my men to leave you alone.
You catch the thief and he begs:
Please don't slay me! I'm a leader. I'll order my men to leave you alone.
Proto Final
He runs to the door. When he gets to the edge of the room he turns.
The Thief: You fools! I'm only a minor thief.
He runs to the door. When he gets to the edge of the room he turns and laughs:
You fools! I'm only a minor thief.
Proto Final
A piece of paper is on the floor: When the Boss conquers Phlan,
we must kill all the important members of the town...except Cadorna.
A piece of paper is on the floor: When the Boss conquers Phlan,
we must slay all the important members of the town...except Cadorna.
Proto Final
You rush to the old thief.
Old Thief: Thank you. But I won't live much longer. Here, take this note. It will be useful to you.
The old thief sinks back in exhaustion and dies.
You rush to the old thief and he groans:
Thank you. But I won't live much longer. Here, take this note. It will be useful to you.
The old thief sinks back in exhaustion and expires.
Proto Final
A notice is pinned on the wall: Don't touch the treasure of Temple of Bane. They will kill temple robbers mercilessly.
A notice is pinned on the wall: Don't touch the treasure in the Shrine of Bane. They will hunt robbers mercilessly.

Wealthy Area

Proto Final
Under a broken table lies a shattered skeleton.
Under a broken table lies a skeleton.
Proto Final
This room is full of dead bodies. They were victims of the orcs.
This room is full of bodies. They were victims of the orcs. 
Proto Final
Six orcs led by a big ogre are in front of you.
Ogre: The prey runs right into my hands!
Six orcs led by a big ogre are in front of you.
The ogre laughs: The prey runs right into my hands!
Proto Final
There is a piece of paper on the floor: Lord Mace is great and strong.
The Boss is greater and stronger. And Lord Bane is a God.
There is a piece of paper on the floor that reads: Mace is great and strong.
The Boss is greater and stronger. And Bane is above all others.
Proto Final
Here are goblin slaves.
Goblin: Help! Don't kill us!
Here are goblin slaves.
One cries: Help! Don't harm us!

Once again, there's an option to "Kill them" in the prototype.

Proto Final
Goblin: Murderers! We are helpless!
Goblin: Marauders! We are helpless!
Proto Final
Goblin: To enter the Temple, you must get the Holy Symbol of Bane.
Goblin: To enter the shrine, you must get the special symbol of Bane.
Proto Final
You see a group of orcs.
Orc Leader: Kill them!
You see a group of orcs.
Their leader shouts: Slay them!
Proto Final
You finish searching the bed but all you find is lice and hair.
You finish searching the bed but all you find are bugs and debris.

Bane Shrine

  • One of the orcs is called "The Orc" during the random encounters in the prototype, as opposed to just "Orc".
Proto Final
You come out in front of a big temple. Orcs guard the entrance.
A blind orc approaches you. The orc reaches his hands out to you.
You come out in front of a big shrine. Orcs guard the entrance.
A blind orc approaches you. The orc reaches his hands out to you.
Proto Final
When you draw back, the orc says:
Blind Orc: I must see if you are worthy to enter the Temple of Bane. Don't be afraid.
When you draw back, the orc says:
Blind Orc: I must see if you are worthy to enter the Shrine of Bane. Don't be afraid.
Proto Final
The orc paws your clothes a moment, then draws back.
Blind Orc: They are unbelievers! Kill them!
The orc paws your clothes a moment, then draws back.
Blind Orc: They are unbelievers! Slay them!
Proto Final
Blind Orc: You are not believers! Die!
Blind Orc: You are not believers! Perish!
Proto Final
When the orc finds the leather holy symbol, he smiles.
Blind Orc: Welcome to the Temple of Bane,supreme God of the Realms.
When the orc finds the leather special symbol, he smiles.
Blind Orc: Welcome to the Shrine of Bane,supreme Commander of the Realms.
Proto Final
There is a blood soaked altar decorated by crude figures of black hands.
There is a dirty podium decorated by crude figures of black hands.

The option to "Destroy altar" was changed to "Destroy it". Before given this option, the first member party says they feel sick. With the blood reference, it makes more sense.

Proto Final
The temple door crashes open as you attempt to destroy the altar.
A very large band of orcs attack. A half-orc priest at the head of the group yells:
Mace: Kill the cursed ones!
The shrine door crashes open as you attempt to destroy the podium.
A very large band of orcs attack. A half-orc cleric at the head of the group yells:
Mace: Slay the terrible ones!

Triggering the boss battle by attempting to destroy the altar/podium.

Proto Final
A human priest appears.
Priest: Here is the Temple Tyr: God of Justice.
Priest: Monsters had occupied it, but we took it back with your help. Thank you.
A human cleric appears and says:
Here is the Shrine of Tyr: Lord of Justice.
Cleric: Monsters had occupied it, but we took it back with your help. Thank you.
Proto Final
Dirten appears.
Dirten: Thank you very much for restoring our temple to us. May Tyr bless and guide you.
Dirten appears.
Dirten: Thank you very much for restoring our shrine to us.¸May Tyr thank and guide you.
Proto Final
A large band of filthy orcs is waiting for you. A half-orc priest at the head of the mob yells.
Mace: Unbelievers! You shall not escape alive.
A large band of filthy orcs is waiting for you. A half-orc cleric at the head of the mob yells:
Unbelievers!  You shall not escape.

When you trigger the boss battle by trying to leave the shrine.

Proto Final
When you finish putting the treasure into your backpack, the doors of the Temple crash open!
A very large band of orcs attack. A half-orc priest at the head of the group yells:
Mace: Kill the desecrators!
When you finish putting the treasure into your backpack, the doors of the shrine crash open!
A very large band of orcs attacks. A half-orc cleric at the head of the group yells:
Slay the desecrators!
Proto Final
You feel the evil dissipate when you destroy the alter.
You feel the wickedness dissipate when you destroy the podium.
Proto Final
It is in the holy light of Dirten
Voice: Dirten, don't die now... I need you still to serve me.
Dirten opens his eyes!
Dirten: Oh, my Lord. I devote my life to you.
A voice echoes from above: Dirten, don't perish now... I need you still to serve me.
Dirten opens his eyes!
Dirten: Oh, my Lord. I devote my life to you.

If Dirten is killed after the boss battle, Braccio will revive him.

Nomad Camp

Proto Final
The kobolds are attacking! Nomads stream from their tents, donning their wargear. The kobolds and nomads are fighting.
The kobolds are attacking! Nomads stream from their tents, donning their wargear. Sounds of battle ring through the camp.
Proto Final
Nomads: You traitors! I'll kill you!
Nomad: You traitors! I'll crush you!
Proto Final
As you are about to fight, the nomads notice you... Hassad: You traitors! Kill those men!
As you are about to fight, the nomads notice you... Hassad: You traitors! Slay those men!
Proto Final
Hassad: We will hold funerals for the warriors who died in the battle. Please leave now.
Hassad: We will hold funerals for the warriors who fell in battle. Please leave now.
Proto Final
A tribal shaman approaches... Shaman: You fought well for us. I'll give you a reward.
A tribal shaman approaches and says: You fought well for us. I'll give you a reward.
Proto Final
One of the bodyguards is slain, but Hassad kills the kobold leader finally.
One of the bodyguards is slain, but Hassad slays the kobold leader finally.
Proto Final
A tribal shaman approaches... Shaman: I'm disappointed. I have no reward for the likes of you... Leave my sight quickly.
A tribal shaman approaches... Shaman: I'm disappointed. I have no reward for the likes of you... Leave my sight immediately.
Proto Final
Chief: Welcome! Honored guests we will have a feast tomorrow/tonight. Surely you can't refuse me?
Chief: Welcome! Honored guests, we will have a feast tomorrow/tonight. Surely you can't refuse me?

Note: The word tomorrow or tonight is used depending on the time of day.

Proto Final
You are led to a tent. You see that the tent was hurriedly tidied.
You are led to a tent. You see that the tent was recently vacated.
Proto Final
A nomad stumbles into your tent:
The Nomad: Oh...You were given the wrong tent.
The Nomad: Here, I'll take you to the right one.
A nomad stumbles into your tent and says:
Oh...You were given the wrong tent.
Here, I'll take you to the right one.

The option to "Kill him" was changed to "Slay him".

Proto Final
The nomad moves to lead you out of the tent... As he turns his back you slip a blade between his ribs.
Someone in the next tent hears the groan and cries:
Voice: Traitors! They killed Samir!
The nomad moves to lead you out of the tent... As he turns his back you slay him quietly.
Someone in the next tent hears the groan and cries:
Traitors! They slew Samir!

In the prototype, there is a more graphic depiction on how you kill the nomad.

Proto Final
Hassad, the chief talks of many things as he drinks his wine.
Hassad: There is an evil pyramid in the southwest.
Hassad, the chief talks of many things as he drinks his cider.
Hassad: There is a wicked pyramid in the southwest.
Proto Final
Hassad: In the castle to the west, only bad humans live.
Hassad: There are bad men in the castle to the west.
Proto Final
Hassad: By the way, please stay here a little longer.
Hassad: The kobolds will attack soon and we need warriors.
Hassad looks very anxious.
Hassad: Please, think on it for a night... The festival ends and you are led to a tent.
Hassad: Please stay here a little longer.
The kobolds will attack soon and we need warriors.
The chief looks very anxious.
Think on it for a night... The festivities end and you are led to a tent.
Proto Final
The chief comes with his bodyguards:
The Chief: Good morning. Please let me hear your reply.
The chief comes with his bodyguards and says:
Good morning. Please let me hear your reply.

Yarash's Pyramid

Proto Final
Lizardman: I think you are not Yarassh's men... Our enemy'ss enemy iss not our enemy. Sso we won't kill you.
Lizardman: I think you are not Yarash's men... Our enemy'ss enemy iss not our enemy. Sso we won't hurt you.

The extra "s" in Yarash's name was removed from the final, and "kill" changed to "hurt".

Proto Final
Lizardman: Yarassh's men! Mutilating sscum! We shall die before we ssubmit to your evil experimentss!
Lizardman: Yarash's men! Malevolent sscum! We shall perish before we ssubmit to your wicked experimentss!
Proto Final
There are many instruments of torture. There is a table with restraint manacles in the center of the room.
Flasks and bottles are lined up along the wall. There are flasks and alchemical equipment on tables.
There are many strange tools. There is a table with manacles in the center of the room.
Flasks and bottles are lined up along the wall. There is alchemist's equipment on tables.
Proto Final
As you pass between the tubs, a lizardman jumps out! He seems to have gone mad from pain.
As you pass between the tubs, a lizardman jumps out! He seems to have gone crazy.
Proto Final
There is a note on the floor:
Number 213 is making a good progress. Number 214 died. Failed again...
There is a note on the floor:
Number 213 is making good progress. Number 214 expired. Failed again...
Proto Final
There is a vast collection of magical junk. Most of it look useless.
There is a vast collection of magical junk. Most of it looks useless.
Proto Final
You have entered the Fountain Chamber. A column of black water jets from the middle of the room.
You have entered the fountain chamber. A column of black water jets from the middle of the room.
Proto Final
Three lizardmen are pouring black water from one tub to another.
All are bound with long chains. Whip-scars lace their backs.
Three lizardmen are pouring black water from one tub to another.
All are bound with long chains.
Proto Final
Lizardman: We won't die eassily! They throw the poisonous water at you.
Lizardman: We won't ssurender! They throw the poisonous water at you.
Proto Final
There's Yarash's desk. You see pieces of paper lying on top...
This is Yarash's desk. You see pieces of paper lying on top...
Proto Final
To the Boss, Valjevo Castle. Surely you jest... I can't even stand your face. Yarash
To the Boss, Valjevo Castle. Surely you jest... I work alone. Yarash

In the prototype, Yarash had a rather nasty insult to Tyranthraxus.

Proto Final
The priest is still smiling sadly.
There is a human priest. He smiles at you.
The cleric is still smiling sadly.
There is a human cleric. He smiles at you.
Proto Final
Priest: I have been digging an escape hole. Little strength is needed to complete it, but I'm too exhausted...
Please finish it for me.
You finish the escape tunnel. The priest is very pleased. Weeping for joy, he climbs out.
Cleric: I have been digging an escape hole. It is almost done, but I'm too exhausted...
Please finish it for me.
You finish the escape tunnel. The cleric is very pleased. Weeping for joy, he climbs out.
Proto Final
Priest: I have given up every hope... Kill me if you want to kill me.
Cleric: I have given up every hope... Slay me if you want to slay me.
Proto Final
There is a man's corpse. All of his equipment has been stripped.
You find a book under the body.
The book reads: Yarash has been breeding creatures for increased ferocity. Most of his experiments fail and die young. Also, all the fighters, thieves, dwarves, and elves are Yarash's men.
Be careful of the Teleporters. There are three kinds of them. One has only one direction, but the others have two or four directions.
There are the remains of a man. All of his equipment is gone.
You find a book under the body.
The book reads: Yarash has been breeding creatures for increased ferocity. Most of his experiments fail and perish young. Also, all the fighters, thieves, dwarves, and elves are Yarash's men.
Be careful of the Teleporters. There are three kinds of them. One has only one destination, but the others have two or four destinations.

East Marsh

Proto Final
Suddenly giant lizards rush you! The battle begins immediately.
Suddenly giant lizards rush at you and attack!
Proto Final
Your party draws their weapons and cut him down. He falls to the ground. His face expresses amazement and disbelief as he dies.
Your characters draw their weapons and cut him down. He falls to the ground. His face expresses amazement and disbelief.
Proto Final
Old Lizardman: You helped my fellowss esscape Yarassh the Ripper.
I thank you. The young lizardman, Dryth, wantss to lead us.
He iss an envoy from Tyranthraxuss. If he were our leader, our tribe would be desstroyed.
As the old lizard finishes, more lizardmen appear. The biggest of the lizardmen steps forward:
Dryth: Old one! It iss time for you to sstep down. To decide who is a more ssuitable leader, I challenge you to a duel. You can have a repressentative if you wish...
The old lizardman turns to you...
Old Lizardman: I can't win. Pleasse fight in my place. There is no other hope.
Old Lizardman: You helped my fellowss esscape Yarassh the Ripper.
I thank you. The young lizardman, Drythfi, wantss to lead uss.
He iss an envoy from Tyranthraxuss. If he were our leader, our tribe would be desstroyed.
As the old lizard finishes, ore lizardmen appear. The biggest of the lizardmen steps forward:
Drythfi: Old one! It iss time for you to sstep down. To decide who is a more ssuitable leader, I challenge you to a duel. You can have a repressentative if you wish...
The old lizardman turns to you and pleads:
I can't win. Pleasse fight in my place. There is no other hope.
Proto Final
Dryth: Cowardss! Kill them! All the lizardmen attack.
Dryth turns to his fellows nd says:
Dryth: Kill the otherss, too!
Drythfi: Cowardss! Sslay them! All the lizardmen attack.
Drythfi turns to his fellows and says:
Drythfi: Slay the otherss, too!
Proto Final
Dryth: Kill thosse men!
Drythfi: Obliterate thosse men!

Wilderness

  • When choosing to take a boat to Phlan, the option "To Phlan" was changed to "Go to Phlan".
Proto Final
You see a large band of kobolds! The kobolds enter a small cave hidden under shrubbery.
You see a large band of kobolds! The kobolds enter a small cave hidden by shrubbery.
Proto Final
Armed men on horseback ride up. The leader comes forward.
Leader: Are you the messengers from Phlan?
Armed men on horseback ride up. The leader comes forward and asks:
Are you the messengers from Phlan?
Proto Final
Leader: Leave now if you have no business here.
Sergeant: Leave now if you have no business here.
Proto Final
Leader: This is the territory of Zhentil Keep. Leave now or we'll kill you.
Sergeant: This is the territory of Zhentil Keep. Leave now or we'll slay you.

Diogenes' Cave

Proto Final
When you enter the cave, a voice booms.
Voice: Who enters Diogenes' house... Answer!
When you enter the cave, a voice booms:
Who enters Diogenes' house... Answer!
Proto Final
2 To challenge the evil leader of Phlan
2 To challenge the wicked leader of Phlan
Proto Final
You hear the roar of flapping wings. A big Silver Dragon lands before you.
You hear the roar of flapping wings. A big silver dragon lands before you.
Proto Final
Diogenes: You fools! I am the Good Silver Dragon.
It is the dragon living in the Phlan that is controlled by the evil.
Diogenes: You fools! I am the Good Silver Dragon.
It is the dragon living in Phlan that is controlled by the wicked one, not I.
Proto Final
After you apologize, the Dragon says:
Diogenes: Hmmmm. . .you are not the absolute fools, anyway.
After you apologize, the dragon says:
Mmmm. . .you are not absolute fools, anyway.
Proto Final
When you draw your weapons, the Dragon roars:
Diogenes: Evil ones! The dragon takes flight.
When you draw your weapons, the dragon roars:
Diogenes: Wicked ones! The dragon takes flight.
Proto Final
The Dragon flies through a hole in the cave ceiling.
The dragon flies through a hole in the cave ceiling.
Proto Final
The Dragon is waiting for you... And he's really mad.
The dragon is waiting for you... And he's really angry.
Proto Final
You try to attack the Dragon, but it feels as though you are frozen. The Dragon throws a Fireball into the middle of your party!
You try to attack the dragon, but it feels as though you are frozen. The dragon throws a Fireball into the middle of your party!
Proto Final
When you recover from the shock of the Fireball, the Dragon had already gone. You leave and continue your adventure.
When you recover from the shock of the Fireball, the dragon had already gone. You leave and continue your adventure.
Proto Final
You hear the roar of flapping wings. A big Silver Dragon lands before you.
You hear the roar of flapping wings. A big silver dragon lands before you.
Proto Final
Diogenes: There is a Kobold Cave in the far east. Go there and defeat the Kobolds.
You will find a bottle with a powerful magic that you will need.
Diogenes: There is a kobold cave in the far east. Go there and defeat the Kobolds.
You will find a bottle with a powerful efreet that you will need.
Proto Final
Diogenes: You should use the Efreet Bottle in Valhingen Graveyard to beat the Vampire.
Diogenes: You should use the efreet bottle in Valhingen Graveyard to beat the vampire.
Proto Final
Diogenes: There is a Vampire in the Valhingen Graveyard. You should kill him.
Diogenes: There is a vampire in the Valhingen Graveyard. You should slay him.
Proto Final
Diogenes: You were foolish to lose the help of the Efreet.
Diogenes: You were foolish to lose the help of the efreet.
Proto Final
Diogenes: It was very kind of you to bring the Efreet Bottle, but it is you that needs the Bottle.
With the Bottle, go to the Valhingen Graveyard and kill the Vampire.
Diogenes: It was very kind of you to bring the efreet bottle, but it is you that needs the Bottle.
Take the bottle to the Valhingen Graveyard and slay the vampire.
Proto Final
Diogenes: The Efreet bottle was my wish and your only hope. You were foolish to lose it.
But there is still some hope... Go to the Valhingen Graveyard. You must kill the Vampire there by yourselves.
Diogenes: The efreet bottle was  your best chance. You were foolish to lose it.
But there is still some hope... Go to the Valhingen Graveyard. You must slay the vampire there by yourselves.
Proto Final
Diogenes: You have nothing I wish.
If you wish to please me, go to the east. Find the Kobolds Cave.
There you will find a bottle filled with a powerful magic.
Diogenes: You have nothing  that I wish.
If you wish to please me, go to the east. Find the kobolds cave.
You will find the efreet bottle there.
Proto Final
You leave and continued your adventure.
You leave and continue your adventure.
Proto Final
Silver dragon said so and flew away from the hole of the ceiling. You go out of the cave.
The silver dragon finishes speaking and flies away through the hole in the ceiling. You leave the cave.

Kobold Cave

Proto Final
Kobold: You are great warriors. We'll pay if you won't kill us.
Kobold: Peace great warriors. We'll pay if you won't harm us.
Proto Final
Kobold: Well, we'll die together now!
Kobold: Well, we'll perish together now!
Proto Final
A net falls from the ceiling and envelopes you.
A net falls from the ceiling and envelops you.
Proto Final
While you try to escape the kobolds attack.
The kobolds attack while you try to escape.

The drunk kobold is present in the prototype:

Proto Final
A drunken kobold is sleeping...
A kobold is sleeping here...

There is an option to "Kill him" in the prototype, or to "Slay him" in the final.

Proto Final
Kobold: Hey, are the envoys of da Boss? Ya want me to take you to the King?
Kobold: Hey, are you the envoys of da Boss? Ya want me to take you to the King?
Proto Final
Kobold: Hey, what's the sword? Don't be joking, ha, ha, ha.
He dies...laughing.
Kobold: Hey, what's the sword for? Don't joke, ha, ha, ha.
He expires...laughing.
Proto Final
The kobold dies without any resistance.
The kobold expires without any resistance.
Proto Final
There is a large forces of kobolds. The Kobold King is sitting at the back of the chamber.
Two human envoys are standing on either side of him.
Envoy: They are our enemies. Destroy them! It will please The Boss.
Kobold King: Kill them now!
There is a large force of kobolds. The kobold king is sitting at the back of the chamber.
Two human envoys are standing on either side of him.
Envoy: They are our enemies. Destroy them! It will please The Boss.
The king shouts: Slay them now!

For some reason, the Kobold King's name isn't capitalized in the final release.

Proto Final
The Envoys: You were stupid to return. Well, this time we are sure to kill you.
Envoy: You were stupid to return. Well, this time we will destroy you.
Proto Final
Kobold King: I shall never let you go!
King: You will never escape!
Proto Final
Samir: You devils! I'll kill you with my hands!
Samir: You devils! I'll destroy you with my bare hands!
Proto Final
You find a young woman in barbarian clothing.
She releases the body of the kobold she has just strangled.
The woman: I'm Fatima, the daughter of the Chief of my tribe.
Fatima: I came here to destroy the kobolds for my tribe.
Unfortunately I was captured, but I just killed the guard and was prepared to escape.
I see you too came to destroy the kobolds. Shall we fight together?
You find a young woman in barbarian clothing.
She releases the body of the kobold she has just slain.
The woman: I'm Fatima, the daughter of the chief of my tribe.
Fatima: I came here to destroy the kobolds for my tribe.
Unfortunately I was captured, but I just slew the guard and was preparing to escape.
I see you too came to destroy the kobolds. Shall we fight together?

Interestingly, after this text is a string of text describing "dead" kobolds which stayed in the final release.

Proto Final
When you try to climb up, stones began to tumble and rattle loudly.
You climb carefully down the slope. Some small stones tumble loose and rattle...
When you try to climb up, stones began to rattle loudly.
You climb carefully down the slope. Some small stones tumble loose and clatter...
Proto Final
Kobold: The King hated me and threw me into a monster's nest.
I'm lucky all I lost was one leg.
Didn't you meet the guard? He's always blotto drunk
Watch for the traps around here.
Kobold: The king disliked me and threw me into a monster's nest.
I'm lucky all I lost was one leg.
Didn't you meet the guard
Watch for the traps around here.

In the prototype, the kobold talks about the drunken kobold. This line was stripped completely in the final.

Proto Final
You kill the kobold.
You slay the kobold.

Of course, there's the option to "Kill him" in the prototype.

Proto Final
You find a rack of mouldy mice hung by their tails.
You find a rack of moldy mice.
Proto Final
Kobold: You've got visitors, Yer Highness.
An old voice answers:
Voice: Take them!
Kobold: Aye, aye. We'll go this way... Zzzzz...
The Kobold is too drunk and falls back to sleep.
Kobold: You've got visitors, Yer Highness.
An old voice answers:
Take them!
Kobold: Aye, aye. We'll go this way... Zzzzz...
The Kobold falls back to sleep.

In the Japanese version and US prototype, after the party discovers the Kobold King died via his own spike pit, one of your party members quips how foolish he was to get killed by his own trap.

Proto Final
The Kobold King has fallen in a spiked pit and died.
(First party member): What a fool! Falling into his own trap.
The kobold king has fallen in a spiked pit and has expired.

Valhingen Graveyard

Proto Final
A mysterious mage bids you farewell.
The mysterious robed stranger bids you farewell.
Proto Final
A zombie with gray hard skin glares at you with hateful eyes.
A zombie with hard, gray skin glares at you with baleful eyes.
Proto Final
There is a coffin with a spirit hovering above it.
Spirit: I am the protecting this body. Leave or suffer my wrath.
There is a coffin with a spirit hovering above it moaning:
I am protect this body. Leave or suffer my wrath.
Proto Final
In the crypt there is the remains of a fully equipped warrior.
In the crypt there are the remains of a fully equipped warrior.

The prototype has an option to "Strip the body", which was changed to "Take the arms".

Proto Final
There is a mausoleum. Piles of human bones are strewn around it.
This is a mausoleum. Piles of bones are strewn around it.
Proto Final
The door of the mausoleum opens violently and a group of zombies surge out.
The door of the mausoleum opens suddenly and a group of zombies surges out.
Proto Final
The air around the mausoleum crackles with static electricity and ball lightning.
The air around the mausoleum crackles with static electricity and lightning.
Proto Final
Words are inscribed in the door: An evil one sleeps here. Enter not.
Holy symbols and braided garlic are hung around the door.
Words are inscribed in the door: A dark one sleeps here. Enter not.
Magic symbols and braided garlic are hung around the door.
Proto Final
A voice rings through the room:
Voice: Welcome brave ones... Take my legacy.
A shadow comes from the fighter's grave and places a sword in front of you.
A voice rings through the room:
Welcome brave ones... Take my legacy.
A shadow comes from the fighter's grave and places a sword in front of you.
Proto Final
Robed Stranger: There is a vampire on the northeast corner.
Robed Stranger: There is a vampire in the northeast corner.
Proto Final
Robed Stranger: Then die scum! The man suddenly attacks you!
Robed Stranger: Then perish scum! The man suddenly attacks you!
Proto Final
There is a dusty coffin. A broken Holy Symbol, a cracked bottle of Holy Water,¸and one scroll are on the ground.
There is a dusty coffin. A broken magic symbol, a cracked bottle of magic water,¸and one scroll are on the ground.
Proto Final
The Scroll reads: To kill the vampire you must find and sanctify his resting place.
The scroll reads: To slay the vampire you must find and sanctify his resting place.
Proto Final
Samir: Evil one! I shall destroy you!
Samir: Wicked one! I shall destroy you!
Proto Final
Your companion cries:
Robed Stranger: The vampire is beyond this north wall!
Your companion cries:
The vampire is beyond this north wall!
Proto Final
The undead don't listen you.
The undead won't listen to you.
Proto Final
A mysterious mage disappeared.
the man then disappears.

Buccaneer Base

Proto Final
They must have found that body. We better get out of here!
They must have found that body. We'd better get out of here!
Proto Final
One of the buccaneer sees you with the dead body.
Buccaneer:  Attack them!
One of the buccaneers sees you with the body and yells:   Attack them!
Proto Final
You slug the slave trader in the face. His nose bleeds and he falls over.
Slave Trader: Ouch! Hey! Guards! His bodyguards leap to the attack!
You slug the slave trader in the face. He falls over and yells:
Ouch! Hey! Guards! His bodyguards leap to attack!

When you attack the slave trader, he was originally supposed to get a bloody nose.

Proto Final
The Man leaves and the crowd breaks up.
Slave Trader:  It was I that was wrong. Please forgive me...
The slave trader wanders away angry.
The man leaves and the crowd breaks up.
Slave Trader: Please sir, I was in error. Please excuse me...
The slave trader slinks away angrily.
Proto Final
Crowd: You little coward! Fools! The crowd shouts abuses at you as you return to camp.
You little coward! Fools! The crowd shouts at you as you return to the camp.

It is unknown where this text is used, if used at all. It may be used if the party flees from battle from the slave trader's bodyguards.

Proto Final
You keep silent and ignore the repulsive slave trader. Slave Trader: Look for other slaves.
Saying that,the trader walks away.
You keep silent and ignore the repulsive slave trader when he says: Look for other slaves.
Saying that,the trader walks away.
Proto Final
Guard: Stay away from that door! You try to sneak into the pen,¸but the guard discovers you.
Guard: Stay away from that door! You tried to sneak into the pen, but the guard discovered you.
Proto Final
You take child out. Other slaves began to run away in a group.
You take the child out. A group of other slaves begins to run away.
Proto Final
Captain: Sure, but he'll cost you 30000GP.
Captain: Sure, but he'll cost you 30,000GP.
Proto Final
Captain: It has been a pleasure doing business with you
Captain: Go back and come again with money, or we cannot make a deal.

In the prototype, the Captain thanks the party for their business. In the final, the text was replaced with the Captain telling your party to return with the money to purchase the boy.

Proto Final
Captain: You put up a good fight. You may ransom yourselves... or die.
Captain: You put up a good fight. You may ransom yourselves... or perish.
Proto Final
You order the slaves to keep away, and draw swords, jumping to the attack.
You order the slaves back, and then drawing your weapons, attack.

This text may be unused.

Zhentil Keep

Proto Final
You are taken inside of the wall.
You are taken inside the Keep.
Proto Final
Until dinner, feel free to look around.
Feel free to look around until dinner.

Spoken by the Commandant.

Proto Final
The guard guiding you says: Guard: This is a barracks... We have more than 100 soldiers here.
There are six more like that in the Keep.
The guard guiding you says: This is a barracks... We have more than 100 soldiers here.
There are six more barracks like that in the Keep.
Proto Final
Guard: This is one of the guard towers. Can see the outside of the wall? It could withstand even a dragon attack.
Guard: This is one of the guard towers. Can you see the outside wall? It could withstand even a dragon attack.
Proto Final
There are four guards. Guard: You are restricted to this room... Please get back inside at once.
There are four guards, one says: You are restricted to this room... Please get back inside at once.
Proto Final
Guard: You can't bribe me! The guards are angry. Guard: Get back to your room. Now!
Guard: You can't bribe me! He adds angrily: Get back to your room. Now!
Proto Final
One guard rings the alarm and they move toward you.
One guard rings the alarm and the others move toward you.
Proto Final
Sergeant: Surrender yourselves or we'll kill you!
Sergeant: Surrender yourselves or we'll slay you!
Proto Final
You run away desperately and get to the front gate. But the guards of the front gate come to the attack.
You run away desperately and get to the front gate. But the guards there charge to the attack.
Proto Final
A large number of guards rush you!
A large number of guards rush at you!
Proto Final
You manage to run away and hide. The alarm begins to ring! Guards charge out of the barracks one after another.
You manage to run away and hide. The alarm begins to ring! Guards pour out of the barracks.
Proto Final
You get through the front gate and leave the outpost.
You get through the front gate and leave the Keep.

Commandant Dinner Text

Proto Final
You are at the dinner table. The menu is baked wild boar and fire water.
You are at the dinner table. The menu is baked wild boar and cider.
Proto Final
Commandant: Once there was a powerful demon... A fire demon I believe.
Commandant: Once there was a powerful monster... A flame clad monster I believe.
Proto Final
Commandant: Do you think Cadorna is suitable for Phlan's mayor?
Commandant: Do you think Cadorna is suitable to be Phlan's mayor?
Proto Final
Commandant: I hope it will withstand
Commandant: I hope it will withstand the attack.
Proto Final
Commandant: But it is also said that the power is evil.
Commandant: But it is also said that the power is wicked.

Stojanow Gate

Proto Final
When you meet them, it's better to bribe 'em and don't offend them.
When you meet them, it's better to bribe 'em and don't offend'em.

When you buy the wagon from the merchant, the text was slightly shortened in the final.

Proto Final
You kill the man and get the wagon.
You slay the man and get the wagon.

When the party decides to kill the merchant and get his wagon for free.

Proto Final
This a guards' barracks. Bunks line the walls.
(First party member): What big beds! I wonder who sleeps here.
This is the guards' barracks. Bunks line the walls.
(First party member): What big beds! I wonder who sleeps here.

When the party enters one of the two towers containing the ettins.

Valjevo Castle

  • In the kitchen, the option to "Attack the gnoll" was changed to "Attack them".
  • In the maze, when deciding whether to push through the thorns or not, the option not to was changed from "Refuse" to "Stay".

The game refers to the woman washing clothes "Washer Woman" in the prototype, which applies to the rest of the dialogue.

Proto Final
A woman is washing clothes.
Woman: You don't belong to this castle.
A woman washing clothes says to you:
You don't belong in this castle.
Proto Final
Washer Woman: Please do not kill us I'll give you some clothes.
Woman: Please do not harm us. I'll give you some clothes.
Proto Final
You tie the woman up.
Washer Woman: Oh, no! I said I won't tell anyone about you!
You tie the woman up and she screams:
Oh, no! I said I won't tell anyone about you!

An option to "Kill her" in the prototype, as opposed to "Slay her" in the final.

Proto Final
You kill the woman
Washer Woman: Noooooo!
The scream echoes everywhere.
You dispatch the woman and
she slumps to the ground

The prototype has a better description. This also explains why the alarm rings after you kill her, because she screamed out. The release version doesn't hint as to why the alarm is raised.

Blacksmith's room:

Proto Final
The smith ignores you and swings down a hammer.
The smith ignores you and keeps working.
Proto Final
Well, please let me get back to work.
Please let me get back to work.
Proto Final
You have such skill... You should be The Boss's retained smith.
Smith: ......
I've been serving Tyranthraxus for a long time.
If you don't know that, you must be strangers.
You have such skill... You should be The Boss's personal smith.
Smith: I've been serving Tyranthraxus for a long time.
If you don't know that, you must be strangers.

The Smith has an extra line of dialogue (kinda).

Proto Final
A lump of meat hangs there.
(First party member): This is a meat storeroom. W-What? The hanging meat... it's human!
A lump of meat hangs there.
(First party member): This is a meat storeroom.

In the prototype, there is a mention of human flesh in the meat storeroom. The removal of this text from the final also led to a glitch where the game's screen scrolls back up to the first-person view while the 'meat storeroom' text is displayed.

The Bane room:

Proto Final
There is an altar to Bane at the back of the room.
A priest in front of the altar turns and approaches.
Priest: Welcome! Accept Bane's blessing
There is a shrine to Bane at the back of the room.
A cleric in front of the shrine turns and approaches.
Cleric: Welcome! Accept Bane's gift.

The option to "Pray" was changed to "Meditate".

Proto Final
Priest: Oh! My Lord Bane! Give your blessing to these men.
Cleric: Bane! Bestow your gift on these men.
Proto Final
Priest: You are not the believers of Bane.
The priest plucks a stone from his necklace and throws it at you... A Fireball explodes!
Cleric: You are not the believers of Bane.
The cleric plucks a stone from his necklace and throws it at you... A Fireball explodes!
Proto Final
Priest: I'm sorry but we don't have much time. Now hurry and accept the blessing.
Cleric: I'm sorry but we don't have much time. Now hurry and accept the gift.
Proto Final
Priest: Tyranthraxus made this chapel. Don't hesitate.
Cleric: Tyranthraxus made this shrine. Don't hesitate.
Proto Final
There is an altar.
There is a podium.
Proto Final
You feel that you are being watched by something very evil and frightening.
You feel that you are being watched by something very dark and frightening.
Proto Final
Two swords are hung behind the altar.
Two swords are hung on the back of the shrine.

Interesting, the acolyte mentions Bane's "blessing" in the final, but censored it later in the final's text.

The Leader was changed to a Sergeant.

Proto Final
Human and giant patrol find you.
A patrol of humans and giants finds you.
Proto Final
Leader: Here they are! Catch them!
Taking their arms, the patrols are coming nearer.
Sergeant: Here they are! Catch them!
The soldiers draw their weapons and approach.
Proto Final
Leader: Well, no problem... I think. The Leader left.
Sergeant: Well, no problem... I think. The Leader left.
Proto Final
Leader: Well, no problem... I think. The Leader leaves.
Leader: Well, no problem... I think. The sergeant leaves.

After giving the password to the leader/sergeant.

Proto Final
Mmmmm... Let me guess... Hurray for Tyranthraxus!
Leader: You fool! There is no such password!
Mmmm... Let me guess... Hurray for Tyranthraxus!
Sergeant: You fool! There is no such password!

The first line is spoken by the first party member. This dialogue is if you haven't got the password yet.

Proto Final
Guard: The patrols will come now!
Guard: The patrols are coming now!
Proto Final
What are you doing here, leaving your post?
Giant: Well...I sorry. The giants leave dejectedly.
What are you doing here, leaving your post?
Giant: Well...I'm sorry. The giants leave dejectedly.

The first line is spoken by the first party member. The giants originally had "dumbed-down" speech.

Proto Final
This is a toilet... Peeeeuuw! It stinks horribly.
This is a latrine.
Proto Final
A deep voice calls from the high in the gate house:
Voice: Give the password!
A deep voice calls from high in the gate house:
Voice: Give the password!
Proto Final
A deep voice yells from the gate house:
Voice: You stole from Lord Bane's temple!
A deep voice yells from the gate house:
Voice: You stole from Bane's shrine!
Proto Final
Giant: Give the password... or die!
Giant: Give the password... or else!
Proto Final
Giant: I don't know that name! Now I'll eat you!
Giant: Wrong... Now I'll eat you!
Proto Final
Giant: Oh, I'm sorry! Go about yer business.
Giant: Oh, I'm sorry! Go about your business.
Proto Final
Giant: You stole from Lord Bane's temple!
Giant: You stole from Bane's shrine!
Proto Final
You are very strong... How do you have all of those muscles. What do you eat?
You are very strong... How did you get all of those muscles? What do you eat?
Proto Final
Proto Final
heartbeat begins to pound his inner ear. His chest begins to ache and threatens to gulp desperately at the water, but still the bottom is beyond reach.
heartbeat begins to pound his inner ear. His chest begins to ache, and hewants to gulp desperately at the water, but still the bottom is beyond reach.

Unfortunately, one of many cases of the prototype having proper spelling, but the final having a typo (hewants).

When the party finds Cadorna, they can "Kill him" in the prototype and "Slay him" in the final.

Proto Final
Cadorna: ......
(None)

In the prototype, this "dialogue" is "spoken" by Cadorna after the party kills him.

Proto Final
Cadorna: And I know how to pass through the maze.
Cadorna: Left... right... right... Please, do not leave me!
Cadorna: And I know how to pass through the maze.
Cadorna: Left... right... right... Please, Don't leave me!
Proto Final
You leave Cadorna: Intruders! Intruders! Cadorna begins to cry out.
You leave. Cadorna begins to cry out: Intruders! Intruders!
Proto Final
This nest is of large snakes! Mice scurry away.
This is a nest of large snakes! Mice scurry away.
Proto Final
Giant: What are you doing? The guard repeats.
The guard rushes to the door and pushes the button violently.
Guard: Patrols are on their way now.
Giant: What are you doing?
The guard rushes to the door and pushes the button violently.
Guard: Patrols are coming now.

Both the prototype and final accidentally label the human guard as a giant.

There is also the text

The alarm begins to ring!

where the prototype has it in parentheses.

Proto Final
Giant: You're the intruders!
Giant: You are the intruders!
Proto Final
The giant glares at you.
Giant: Who are you?
The giant glares at you and growls:
Who are you?
Proto Final
Giant: You think you are so smart,well we know we real smart.
Giant: You think you are so smart? Well we know we are real smart.
Proto Final
Giant: You stole from Lord Bane's temple!
Giant: You stole from  Bane's shrine!
Proto Final
Much armor is here. Do you take them?
There is a lot of armor here. Do you take it?
Proto Final
You attack the gnoll. The gnoll tries to escape...
but you surround him. You attack him!
The gnoll is dead.
You attack the gnoll. The gnoll tries to escape...
But you surround him. You attack him!
The gnoll perishes.
Proto Final
The gnoll grabs the pan and throws hot oil at you!
The gnoll grabs the pan!
Proto Final
You advance and cut the overseer's throat!
You advance and attack the overseer!
Proto Final
Guard: Temple robbers! The guard attacks you!
Guard: Shrine robbers! He attacks!
Proto Final
You enter a bright candle lit room.
You enter a bright candle-lit room.
Proto Final
Guard: You don't belong to the castle, do you?
Guard: You don't belong in the castle, do you?
Proto Final
Guard: What are you doing here?
Officer: What are you doing here?
Proto Final
There is a note on the floor: I am wearing fire You can't believe what you see...Tyranthraxus
There is a note on the floor: I am clothed in flame. Believe not what you see...Tyranthraxus
Proto Final
You find a report indicating that the northern nomads are ready for the take over of a strong leader and that the chief of the raven clan is allied to Tyranthraxus.
You find a report indicating that the northern nomads are ready for a strong leader and that the chief of the raven clan is allied to Tyranthraxus.
Proto Final
You understand what Tyranthraxus has been doing. Tyranthraxus was only a member of an evil organization originally.
You now understand what Tyranthraxus has been doing. Tyranthraxus was only a member of a wicked organization originally.
Proto Final
You cut his throat! He collapses dead.
You slay him! He collapses.

In the library, if the scribe that enters the room doesn't see the party, they have the option to "Kill him" in the prototype, or "Slay him" in the final. Like other parts of the game, the prototype had a more graphic depiction of how your party subdues the scribe.

Proto Final
Your sense of direction has disappeared. You find yourself in another place.
You lose your sense of direction.
Proto Final
Three giant guards are talking and laughing their duties. They don't even seem to notice you.
Three giant guards are talking while doing their duties. They don't even seem to notice you.
Proto Final
Giant: Idiot! That not password!
Giant: Idiot! That's not the password!
Proto Final
Giants: You are the temple robbers! The giants attacks you suddenly.
Giants: You are the shrine robbers! The giants suddenly attack.
Proto Final
Giant: I sorry sir! We were on duty. We not lazy.
Giant: I'm sorry sir! We were on duty. We are not lazy.

The hill giants were made to sound dumber in the prototype.

Proto Final
You go into a broken tower.
You go into a ruined tower.
Proto Final
There are trolls. They don't notice you.
There are trolls, but they don't notice you.
Proto Final
Trolls attack from cover!
Trolls ambush you!
Proto Final
A big stone is falls from above!
A big stone falls from above!
Proto Final
Tyranthraxus forced me to work for him. Please leave me alone.
Man: Please! Leave me alone! I'll give you the information I have. Here! This is it.
Tyranthraxus forced me to work for him. Please don't hurt me.
Man: Please! Don't hurt me! I'll give you the information I have. Here! This is it.

The note the man gives you in the prototype is called a "Memo", which it's also called in Japanese.

Proto Final
Proto Final
Giant: Frog and toad is different. Anyway, they are not same
I'm right, aren't I?
Giant: Frogs and toads are different. Anyway, they are not the same
I'm right, aren't I?
Proto Final
The other giants burst out laughing. The first giant grows angry: I'll kill them...
The other giants grab the first, and one shouts laughing: Run away puny ones!
The other giants burst out laughing. The first giant grows angry: I'll teach 'em...
The other giants grab the first, and one laughs: Run away puny ones!
Proto Final
First Giant: See. I right!
Second Giant: What!?! You can no trust little ones!
Second Giant: Kill them! First Giant No. I no let you hurt!
The giants start to fight among themselves.
The giants pummel each other for a while and then one points at your party:
Why WE fight THEY start it!
Giants begin to attack!
First Giant: See. I was right!
Second Giant: What!?! You can not trust those little ones!
Second Giant: Hurt them! First Giant: No. Leave 'em alone!
The giants start to fight among themselves.
The giants pummel each other for awhile and then one points at your party:
Why are WE fighting? THEY started it!
All the giants begin to attack!
Proto Final
Second Giant: Why don't you run away? So you want to be killed, don't you?
Giants attack.
Second Giant: Why didn't you run away? You want to fight, don't you?
Giants attack.
Proto Final
There are four giants.
Giant: Enemy! Attack!
There are four giants.
Giant: Thieves! Knock them down!
€There are four giants and one shouts:
Enemy! Attack!
There are four giantsand one shouts:
Thieves! Get 'em!
Proto Final
You enter a gorgeous decorated room. There is a showy dressed, strong looking man.
Man: What is your business with the King of Phlan, Tyranthraxus?
You enter a beautifully decorated room with a well-dressed, strong looking man inside.
Man: What is your business with Tyranthraxus, the King of Phlan?
Proto Final
Man: You know the true character already, don't you?  I am a double of Tyranthraxus. I will disappear, O.K.?
Man: You know who I really am, don't you? I am a double for Tyranthraxus. I can go now, O.K.?
Proto Final
The man run away. Lots of treasures left.
The man runs away. There is a lot of treasures left.
Proto Final
Man: A double life was not so bad, but this crown is too heavy. This is quite serious to me.
Man: Being an imposter was not so bad, but this crown is too heavy. It weighs on me.
Proto Final
Man: What? Aren't you on our side? Guards! Don't let them go alive!
Man: What? Aren't you on our side? Guards! Don't let them go!
Proto Final
Tyranthraxus: Then die!
Tyranthraxus: Then perish!

Tyranthraxus' Lair

Proto Final
This room is empty. You find a trap door in the floor.
This room is empty, but you find a trap door in the floor.
Proto Final
Man: You are the temple robbers! The man attacks you suddenly.
Man: You are the shrine robbers! The man attacks you suddenly.

Either the thief or Genheeris attacks the party if they steal from the shrine to Bane in Valjevo Castle.

Proto Final
Man: Oh, a large number of people... What kind of messages has Lord Tyranthraxus sent me?
Genheeris: Oh, messengers... What word does Lord Tyranthraxus send to Genheeris?

The introduction of Genheeris was changed in the final.

Proto Final
Proto Final
The man: Tell Al-hyam Dhazid to start the second phase of plan A,then leave.
Genheeris: Tell Al-hyam Dazid to start the second phase of plan A,then leave.
Proto Final
The man frowns... Man: Tyranthraxus sent you to kill me?
Man: Well? What do you think of working with me? Together we can kill Tyranthraxus. I'll make you all generals.
Man: I'll go with you. If I may?
Genheeris frowns and says: Tyranthraxus sent you to slay me?
Genheeris: Well? What do you think of working with me? Together we can slay Tyranthraxus instead. I'll make you all generals.
Genheeris: I'll go with you. If I may?
Proto Final
I'll try to get aid while you go to kill Tyranthraxus. Is that OK?
I'll try to get aid while you go to slay Tyranthraxus. Is that OK?

If the party passes Tyranthraxus' quarters after recruiting Genheeris, he will leave the party.

Proto Final
Tyranthraxus: Guards! Kill that rabble.
Tyranthraxus: Guards! Get that rabble.
Proto Final
Tyranthraxus: You're rather strong to have made it this far. I am sorry you have to die...
Tyranthraxus: You're rather strong to have made it this far. I am sorry you have to perish...

Ending

Proto Final
Tyranthraxus: You fools! You can't destroy me, even if you kill my body.
Tyranthraxus: You fools! You can't destroy me, even if you destroy this shell.

Spells

Most of the spells are the same. However, Bless and Prayer were changed to Empower and Meditation in the released version, respectively.